Dreams of the Rarebit fiend

Over all the style goes from a clean line to a messy line. It seems that when he is closer to a frame where he is in a bed that it tends to be more scratchy than in other frames. The type matches the style of the drawing in most cases. The text kind of in just hovering wherever it can find space. I don't feel that it is integrated to well. When they are dreaming everything is line work. When they are awake there are blocks of black color. It is expected that while dreaming you will see thing presented in line work, but the closer they get to waking up the darker the blocks of black get. The main character of each page seem to be so dramatic to the point where if something happens to them eveything stops.